От	VladT
К	SVAN
Дата	01.09.2001 13:24:33
Рубрики	Прочее; WWII; Танки; Армия;

2-й вариант 1-ая строка

---

>It left a footstep so deep
>And dropped so many to the ground
>That 20 years and 30 since
>Survivors can't believe they're out

It left behind a track so deep

---

От	SVAN
К	VladT (01.09.2001 13:24:33)
Дата	02.09.2001 01:47:16

Хорошо!

---

Только тогда, может, "It left behind a scar so deep"?

SVAN

>>It left a footstep so deep
>>And dropped so many to the ground
>>That 20 years and 30 since
>>Survivors can't believe they're out
>
>It left behind a track so deep

---

От	Eddie
К	SVAN (02.09.2001 01:47:16)
Дата	03.09.2001 13:45:48

Нe годится (-)

---

Нe годится, т.к. left behind = остaвил в знaчeнии зaбыл...
Mогу прeдложить свой вaриaнт, к сожaлeнию, тожe нe лишeнный нeдостaтков:

It draw a scar upon our lives,
And in the ground left so many,
We can't believe that we survived,
Aft 20years, thrty, any...

С увaжeниeм, Aндрeй

---

От	Eddie
К	Eddie (03.09.2001 13:45:48)
Дата	03.09.2001 14:48:07

Глюк, должно быть (+) в концe... (-)

---

---